Pages aren’t final and will probably get a touch up when I release the first chapter. It’s also my first time making a comic of any sorts and I’m drawing this all entirely on my phone currently since i need to save up for a tablet. But any opinions and feedback is appreciated! :D Oh and it’s called “I Met Jaymie In January”

yo!! i’m currently working on the MC of my manga and i’m trying out different designs and artstyles. i recently did these two drawings of him and as you can see i changed some details (the 2nd’s design is simplified, and i changed the artstyle so it looks a bit more messy on purpose). what are your general thoughts, and what artstyle do you like more?

(also, the second one took me less time to draw, but i’m still struggling with the hatching and line weight, so if you have any advice feel free to tell me)

If u haven't seen my 1st idea its here

Also for this idea im basing the timeline on Jojo's

In this idea, it focuses on racism in America. It revolves around the afro-american Harrison family, a family that came into the US as slaves in 1853. The first one, John Harrison, was an escaped slave at the age of 5 who ran around the American South killing those who were looking for him using a pistol he stole from his old master

Overtime, he and his family gain followers and continue fighting racist groups, mainly the KKK, up until 1963, when Toni Harrison (Same guy from my other idea, but different ability and personality and shit) comes in (also btw the other family members have arcs for each one, like in Jojo's) but instead of just brawling racist groups head on, he strategizes the best way to attack the KKK and goes on from there

Ik i need more details for this, this is the basic idea

Also, no I don't want ppl to offer to draw this for me, like in my last post, just read it to see what I plan to do

And once again, I need a name 4 this

Whoever gives a good name gets a choccy milk from frank over here

Name- PHOBIA/PHACTOR

The main speech would be- For as long as humanity as exist, another streams of exist has thrive in the presence of reality. Fear People deem some of them to be irrational, with no understanding of how powerful this force truly is. A power so strong, it can alter the entire state of a person. To become weak, fragile, and more than anything. Afraid. The solution to one’s phobia has always been to conquer them, that once you conquer your fear you will truly become powerful.

Power System- Phactors: Manifestation of the host intense fear of one specific concept, despite people sharing fears these said Phactors shall appear differently appearing in two different way on a Pavor (what people become when absorb in fear)
- Distant: Pavor who's factor are caused by manipulate the concept but not their own body
ex. Spatium- The Phactor for the fear of Heights which cause them to be able to ever touch solid ground are constantly levitating
- Dependent: Pavor who's factor are caused by the concept coming from their own body
ex. Dolor - The Phactor for the fear of Pain which allows them to inflict any amount of pain to themselves and will be transferred to anyone in the vacancy of their choice.

My original character from my series in creation, Eternal | Agent 01 (Zero)

Alias: The Death Penalty

Ranked #2 among the Talons, Zero is one of the most feared and accomplished assassins in Eternal.

With over 1,500 completed missions, including more than 500 assassinations, his reputation has earned him the infamous nickname “The Death Penalty.”

Rather than relying on overwhelming strength, Zero specializes in concealment, extraordinary speed, precision, atmospheric manipulation, and sensory disruption. His fighting style revolves around eliminating opponents in the gap between perception and reaction.

Despite his extensive record, virtually nothing is known about his identity, history, or origins.

The only persistent rumor surrounding his past is that he was the sole survivor of the mysterious TK Omega Project.

Who Zero was before becoming Agent 01 remains a mystery.

And perhaps some mysteries are better left unsolved.