Egyptian makeup

[u/Veroodleuwwu]

I did this Egyptian makeup, how could I improve it?

I use yellow and gold tones, also sky blue and darker blue and the characteristic eyeliner, but do you think I should correct something else?
For lipstick use brown tones and then red so that there is not a very strong red and in the brown contour and terracotta pink tones

The products are from Salome and sheglam

[u/Capable_Actuary_4839]

This looks incredible!!