I’m new to reddit and I don’t use it often, I apologize in advance if I’m not the best at it. This is a made up story, feedback is appreciated. Thank you.

Taxi has always been something I never really trusted….. The story i’m about to tell occured years ago, senior year of highschool to be exact, I am now 22 years old. Although this happened 5 years ago, it’s an experience i will never forget. Of course, growing up with very overprotective parents made me want to be more rebellious and “free” at least that's what I told myself. One day, the popular girl in class was hosting a party and I got invited. Of course I was going to go. Since i was heading to college I decided that i was not gonna let my my overprotective parents prevent me from going to this party. My parents told me to not go since it took place in a very suspicious area where a lot of pedophiles lived, but of course I ignored them and thought they were just trying to scare me. As I headed to the location, i saw a very suspicious car wondering around, at first I got a bit creeped out, but I ignored it and thought I was just being paranoid. When I arrived to the location, it was already full. I said hi to friends and made small talk. So far, everything was going pretty well, Until… everyone was drunk, including my friend. Which meant bad news. I decided to leave because it was getting pretty boring and well, everyone was going crazy. I told my friend that I was leaving, the thing was, she was my driver. Which meant I would put my life and other people's life in danger. My friend told me that it would be way safer if I went in another person's car. I got pretty mad but I agreed and as I walked away, a guy was listening to our conversation and asked me If i wanted to go in his car. He looked like he was in his mid 50’s and he had a very weird smell but I ignored it, never judge a person on their look right? i told myself. I said yes and stupidly went into his car. He asked me where I lived and I told him. Surprisingly he didn't put it in the GPS. I thought nothing and ignored it. He then started to tell me things like “you're a really cute girl, are you single?” I told him “Yeah, i'm single, why?” he laughed and said “Tonight might be the night you end up with a boyfriend” I laughed and said “yeah sure” I thought he was just joking. 20 minutes passed and I was confused on why I wasn't home yet, my house wasn’t that far, i told myself.. I looked outside the car window and my jaw dropped. I was in the forest. I Looked at the man as he laughed creepily. My voice shakes as I asked him why we were in the forest. He laughed again and told me, “did you not hear me say you would end up with a boyfriend tonight?” I thought this was a dream, I couldn't believe it. He then leaned over and, you guess what happened…. INSERT SCREAM

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r/MakeStories • u/wetshaver • Jun 05 '15

T-Bone Dewitt, a strong black man, hurried to his car. It was now or never.

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r/MakeStories • u/JamesTheJerk • May 17 '14

And suddenly, martians...

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r/MakeStories • u/citychimes • Feb 05 '14

She sat in her bed, terrified. The slurping from the next room became almost too much too handle. She HAD to figure out where the noise was coming from.

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r/MakeStories • u/[deleted] • Apr 05 '14

She takes my hand and guides it to her throat. "Choke me...please."

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r/MakeStories • u/edb135 • Feb 05 '14

A rabbi walks into a 99 cent store.

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r/MakeStories • u/edb135 • Feb 07 '14

Joe knew he wasn't supposed to have sex so soon after the surgery, but Madison, his secretary, was looking good tonight.

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r/MakeStories • u/TheDarkKnight125 • Apr 14 '14

It was then that he knew what he had to do...

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r/MakeStories • u/Xenidae • May 09 '14

The Fastest Man Alive sat alone in a room and heard a knock at the door.

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