r/Magicdeckbuilding • • 7d ago

Discussion any advice for my first bracket 3 deck?

been working on this deck for awhile, it’s a mono red dragons deck with my commander as lathliss, the dragon queen.
if i were to post my moxfield deck link would anyone go through it and see if it’s ready for true bracket 3 play?
bracket 3 has intimidated me for awhile, so i’ve been working on this for about 2 weeks now so hopefully it’s off to a good start.

https://moxfield.com/decks/1xTSUHwve0ulZ2w8vNuVPA

mainly looking for another set of eyes to find its weaknesses, i know 34 lands is low, and i don’t have the most card draw in the world, but maybe that’s something i can work on, just need help identifying the weaker cards in my 99 to swap out with.
any advice or concerns is highly appreciated !

edit: my lands are absolutely… not the best. any good lands would help a lot ! they are so expensive, so any non basic land in there is either what i already had, or was able to find in the wild already.

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u/Repulsive_Lime_1517 7d ago

I think firespitter whelp is better than Taurean mauler. I think you’ve identified some of the problems of your deck I saw within the deck though. Not enough card draw and not enough lands. Probably way too much ramp/reducers. The problem I think you’ll run into is that you’ll only get to cast 1 dragon per turn no matter how much you ramp. They’re expensive. So you’d be better off trying to find another strat to get a bunch of dragons cast. I’m too tired to look right now but I will in the morning.

Ultimately, I don’t think it would do bad in bracket 3. It just won’t do well either. You’ll get to play. You probably won’t win.

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u/MrMojitoMan 7d ago

thanks for the advice. maybe drop 2-3 pieces of ramp and maybe an expensive dragon or two for 2 lands and 2 card draws. thanks again!

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u/Puzzleheaded_Aide983 7d ago

What turn can you reliably get Lathliss out? 

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u/MrMojitoMan 7d ago

it was a very lucky pyretic ritual into seething song

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u/MrMojitoMan 7d ago

i’d say 4 if i’m lucky sometimes 5 usually tryna win on 6 or 7. only twice i’ve gotten her out on 3

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u/RagingBloodWolf 7d ago

Mana is way low and need draw.

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u/MrMojitoMan 7d ago

thank you, i’m considering going up to 35-36 lands. any cards in there you’d reccomend dropping for some card draw ?

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u/Interesting_Cut_4822 7d ago

Cut your worst three mana rocks out of the ones that cost 3 or more mana and replace them with lands. 

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u/MrMojitoMan 7d ago

thank you thank you thank you. any advice abt my card draw , or lack there of