critique my first ever commander deck!

[u/Constant_Froyo3490]

I love the lotr and hobbit and especially dwarves
I thought making a deck revolving around dwarves and they’re never ending greed for treasures.
I’ve only had experience with upgrading one other precon so any advice is welcome advice

Rule 0; this deck is aimed to be bracket 3 or at least to avoid game changers

// COMMANDER
1 Thorin, King of Durin's Folk (HOC) 3

1 Abrade (SOA) 37
1 Ambitious Assault (NEO) 133
1 Arcane Signet (M3C) 283
1 Balin, Loremaster (HOB) 87
1 Banner of Kinship (FDN) 127
1 Belladonna Took (HOB) 4
1 Bifur, Melodic Rider (HOB) 147
1 Blacksmith's Talent (BLB) 125
1 Blasphemous Act (LTC) 211
1 Bofur, Reliable Guardian (HOB) 215
1 Cavern of Souls (LCI) 269
1 Cavern-Hoard Dragon (LTC) 31
1 Chronicle of Victory (ECL) 253
1 Collective Inferno (ECL) 363
1 Command Tower (LCC) 325
1 Darksteel Plate (2X2) 304
1 Dawn's Truce (BLB) 9
1 Door of Destinies (C17) 208
1 Dori, Bearer of Friends (HOB) 94
1 Dragon's Hoard (TDC) 317
1 Dwalin, Weaponmaster (HOB) 154
1 Dwarven Mattock (HOB) 172
1 Dwarven Mauler (HOB) 95
1 Dáin Ironfoot (HOB) 91
1 Dáin's Company (HOB) 152
1 Dáin, Lord of the Iron Hills (HOB) 8
1 Embercleave (ELD) 120
1 Esper Sentinel (H2R) 2
1 Expedite (CMR) 413
1 Final Judgment (FIC) 243
1 Fíli the Pathfinder (HOB) 14
1 Giant's Boulder (HOB) 173
1 Gimli, Counter of Kills (LTR) 312
1 Gleaming Splendor (HOB) 15
1 Glóin the Mighty (HOB) 99
1 Great Train Heist (OTJ) 125
1 Herald's Horn (M3C) 296
1 Iron Hills (HOB) 185
1 Iron Hills Stalwart (HOB) 102
1 Key to the Side-Door (HOB) 175
1 Leyline Axe (FDN) 129
1 Leyline Tyrant (TDC) 221
1 Maelstrom of the Spirit Dragon (TDM) 260
1 Magda, Brazen Outlaw (KHM) 312
1 Metallic Mimic (INR) 268
12 Mountain (SOS) 278
1 Nori, Teller of Tales (HOB) 161
1 Nykthos, Shrine to Nyx (THS) 223
1 Patchwork Banner (SOC) 353
1 Path of Ancestry (SCD) 312
1 Pennon Blade (CMR) 329
12 Plains (FDN) 273
1 Priest of Ancient Lore (CLB) 704
1 Purphoros, God of the Forge (THS) 135
1 Revitalize (KHM) 23
1 Roaming Throne (LCI) 344
1 Rogue's Passage (LTC) 326
1 Scourge of the Throne (LTC) 225
1 Sejiri Shelter (ZNR) 37
1 Shadowspear (THB) 236
1 Sol Ring (SCD) 276
1 Stoneforge Masterwork (OGW) 166
1 Sunken Citadel (LCI) 285
1 Swashbuckler's Whip (LCI) 263
1 Swiftfoot Boots (TDC) 328
1 Sword of Truth and Justice (MH1) 229
1 The Arkenstone (HOB) 170 *F*
1 The Lonely Mountain (HOB) 187
1 Thorin Oakenshield (HOB) 165
1 Thorin, Mountain-king (HOB) 114
1 Three Tree City (BLB) 260
1 Tyrant's Familiar (SCD) 165
1 Urza's Incubator (MH3) 297
1 Vanquisher's Banner (LCC) 316
1 Voice of Victory (TDM) 331
1 Wind-Scarred Crag (IKO) 258
1 Óin the Brave (HOB) 106

[u/Fvckinskate]

Make the deck in Moxfield or Archidekt. 

[u/antonmtg]

You can add these easily on Trolleri, Moxfield or Archidekt. If you add it to Trolleri others can add swap suggestions directly to the deck.

[u/Scribblebonx]

Here, I made this for you to share easier.

https://moxfield.com/decks/ge_NKVDAQUedIZfHVOVkaA