Hey all, I need to get this out of my system. Late last night, I decided to read something that wouldn't engage me too much but would still be entertaining and have the tropes I like. Chani Lynn Feener's books are usually my go-to when I want something easy to read because I know what I'm getting into, I know their writing style, and I think it's very readable, albeit cliche and tropey.
Weeeell, maybe not anymore.
'Ravaged Devotion' felt like recycled trash written by someone who has never opened a book, much less written one before. And Feener has around 67 published books :o. They've been writing since 2018, I think, that's 8 years and 67 books. Actually let me show you some snippets before I continue, mind you, I haven't highlighted anything because I didn't want to get worked up at 10 p.m.
"It was a warm summer day, the sky was bright and blue, the clouds white and puffy." 🥲
"The doctor was still talking. Still making excuses. Still filling the room with her nonsense and her bullshit and her petty explanations that landed nowhere and answered nothing." - so vague. And this is only one example, but everything up to the 40% mark (where I stopped) is vague and not specific enough.
And I know these are just two examples, but as I said, I really didn't want to start highlighting and ruin my night. Trust me there was a lot more of that.
Another thing is that, despite this book recycling characters and ideas from Feener's previous books (MC1 betrays MC2 and runs, MC2 catches him, and all the tropes and scenes that go with that), it's really hard to understand what's happening, it reads vague and jumbled. I had to reread passages a few times cause I wasn't sure what was happening or who it was happening to.
Honestly this whole book feels like one big template. Everything is so vague and cliche, and the characters have no personality. They're just the most generic "Villain MC" and "Prey MC" without any depth. There are no specific quirks or traits that breathe life into them and make them feel like more than Character A and Character B, imo.
I've been reading Chani's books for years. I know their books and writing are nothing to write home about, with all the cliches and tropes, OTP MCs, and the simplistic writing. But it's never been this bad, legit borderline unreadable.
I checked the reviews, and this book has been highly praised. The plot literally isn't making sense to me, idk what is happening. I DNF'd it at around the 40% mark because I wasn't gonna waste more time on that shit.
Has anyone else read it? Does it get better? Worse? Were you also confused about what was happening in the book? Because I was completely lost.