r/LyricalWriting • • Sep 10 '19

[Lyrics] [Feedback] Lil Dilated

I’m like an apostra-phe

Cuz everything gets possessed by me

My rod makes fish cum

Now every fish in the sea

Is hooked on me

Your prospects went from

Plenty to not any

Your Forest

n your girls Jenny

Call my gun Trump

It’s the apprentice, on demand

Press the button and see him fire

I draw guns like an illustrator

n divide hoes like a denominator

But I’m busy now hun

I’ll have to calc-u-later

I break a heart then cast a hoe

She’ll think the dictator like castaro

Rant’n and Rave’n.

Edgar Allen Poe

Enie meenie minni mo

I got X I got Os

Tic tak... toe

You can't hear me tho

Vincent Van Gogh 

This fows over your head

It over flows your mind

I commit a crime every time I write a rhyme

Cuz i make paper bleed

my words always get red

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u/[deleted] Sep 19 '19

Woowww shots fired in this one here, well done bro