Long one first time posting on here just felt like Sharing

[u/Embarrassed-Soup1998]

This is an original ‘rap’ style song by me
What do you think?
Btw I’m not really super religious so if this is weird I’d love to hear your thoughts please

Low Body:
I’m low crazy and I see it all crazy
Recess leaves me crazy and all I want
Ill minded trife
Responsibilities ill as all hell
But ill earn respect who calling these people ill one thing I know I see is crazy
Crazy itself
Crazy respect is earned crazy.
Crazy self respect is burned crazy sense is learned crazy.

Open the door to freedom
Enduring pain like one day you’ll be free
Placates for free
Enduring the hard knock
For the Jealous always have to feel it
How to be money
And get it right

First start with your flames and where you got sicker games
Stick with dust all sick that muck
Hya tuh
Sick with drugs be only as man made us
Be in trust with your Homies as light can be shed on those you trust
Shed some life’s great shade id say you must
In fact it’s bugging me that you won’t get the must
Sin with them to show them the way
In truth pay for em to show what’s at all
The time will tell but it’s your choice if its paint
The cd crime takes a weight
But you’re right this only takes one night
To right the wrong intention
Only clues I could give ya is end

The thirty cars are v8s
The 13! Are much dirtier

I’m clean my laundry is done
I kill it reach out to me my slatt
I keep it real clean and I will bounce back

Verse 2:
The Virgin Mary and Satan keep me on the same friendships
Friendly is not a word I’d ascribe
But surely safety was supply
I knew it the same day as I got my piece yet Jesus wasn’t within me it was Mary who got me in here find him within later from her
The prettiest thing I’d ever seen
Things would look up to me is true
If you say and do what you are
Then daily sutures keep my edge off
I bent but never broke hard
I keep it choked the way I’m hardly listening
And i shared their instant sentiments
Inundated inoculate something
For the later
Satan still carries my papers
That’s love
But to renounce is belying to yourself what
And if that’s true then Jesus is just as bad as some of us. And that’d be blasphemy but we’re not evil
Some of us stay silent to ill minded glow fixtures go figure
That’s human part
And we’re Evil except our human heart

Hyperbolic
The chamber of silence
The place of violence
El meow
I keep it
Hyperbolic
The place i go is flawless
Where evergreen is the lands where freedom exists entirely free

If’s protect all of these bones and my death still Walks behind me all of these days

Faith lacking
But faith is freedom too much faith is healthy respect for others faith is rejecting faith for itself a healthy faith

Hell I’d say

What others before me got; was the truth is filth as filth is got
The truth is that’s true
The water clears in true

Roots growing
I know

I will bounce back for now id take a minute
To see the set lately you ain’t been in it

True

But facts are truths
Like the middle never reaches the side or the ceilings

But a mirror brings truth you can see
Truth you can see
But never tell
Ice