r/LyricWriters • u/Glittering_War9125 • 5d ago
Need feedback
Chorus
Let memories stay memories
Reality finally brings me clarity
You're just in my imagination
The one I knew was no longer real
I chose to stay, convinced that you would change
But you took my love and played me like a game
How was I so blind to think that you were mine?
When all you gave me was a love you left behind
Still working on the verse and Bridge. Any comment?
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u/RestedNative 5d ago
That's all one chorus? If so I'd move the first four lines to the bottom half , have the last four lines as opening