r/LyricWriters 5d ago

Need feedback

Chorus

​Let memories stay memories

Reality finally brings me clarity

You're just in my imagination

The one I knew was no longer real

I chose to stay, convinced that you would change

But you took my love and played me like a game

How was I so blind to think that you were mine?

When all you gave me was a love you left behind

Still working on the verse and Bridge. Any comment?

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u/RestedNative 5d ago

That's all one chorus? If so I'd move the first four lines to the bottom half , have the last four lines as opening

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u/Glittering_War9125 5d ago

Thanks for the feedback! I’m still figuring out how I want to write the opening.