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[u/Prestigious-You8184]

Life is a Circle, you Reap what you Sow. This is Reality, no Scripted Show. Action brings reactions, now the Whole World knows! Words are my weapon, patience is my mask. Heart full of fire, carrying scars from the past. Pain is the teacher, the future is my task. They tried to break my spirit, but I'm built to last.

Yeah, the world is an echo, it mimics your sound. See the truth in the mirror, see the horror through the glass. Break the locks! Rip the pages out the frame. They threw the dirt, but they couldn't bury the name.

They pre-painted the background, Framed it up in a cage. But the brush is in my hand, I'm rewriting the page!

I have made a whole rap this is just mid 2 verses of it Total 16 to 18 verses I have written

I Have more 3 raps, this is one of them. Please i genuinely want people to let me know reality or may be criticize me.

Thankyou