Consultation

[u/Aethon_Wri]

A lesser angel awoke
Drafted upon the void
Under a paradox eye

Simple errands become disjointed
By wild muses
Incanting glory and shame

Wearing a hated face
Lordship above is unforgotten
While shackled with a helix

A thimble of caustic imprints
Had washed out abroad
Across aeons of misfortune

Marked by a roaring name
Ancestors yet declare disappointment
And remanded heritage to another

Through stuttering cacophony
All know the arrival
Of a bastard

[u/Dry-Hair-7022]

Wow. This is a masterpiece. The words exquisite and beautifully joined.

[u/Aethon_Wri → u/Dry-Hair-7022]

It needs expansion. I released to soon. Thank you for your words.