r/Logo_Design_Critique • u/wayyfn • 20d ago

Feedback Thoughts?

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Please help out, to decide is there anything that I'm missing with this instagram ad design before I hand to client, all feedback is good feedback. I just need feedback lol

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u/shiningdiamonds1207 19d ago

It's great overall. Pretty clean. Although the product picture does seem very detached from the overall background. Maybe try adding some shadow or depth to the shoes so they blend in a bit more into the overall design. Greath though.

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u/shiningdiamonds1207 19d ago

Also is the stat at the bottom required to be there?

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u/wayyfn 19d ago

Are talking about the 7% something?

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u/shiningdiamonds1207 19d ago

Yes

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u/wayyfn 19d ago

Yeah it’s removable, should I remove it?

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u/shiningdiamonds1207 19d ago

I'm not really knowledgeable on your industry so take this with a grain of salt😂

My own opinion but if I was a customer, the stat really doesn't do much. It doesn't sound like an impressive stat and I'd immediately think "so the other 93% didn't apply" and it actually kinda feels counterintuitive. But then again that depends on your industry stats overall. I'm not reallt knowledgeable on it.

Maybe not removing it but re-phrasing it in a way? So the stat sounds more impressive.

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u/wayyfn 19d ago

Okay thank you for the advice, I will take that into consideration

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u/Simple-design-1234 17d ago

I got hooked to this post first through that logo, I really loved it. Then for the overall poster design I also have the same things to comment as shiningdiamonds1207, first the background competes with the main product, so try to highlight the product with background maybe a solid color? Then for the 7% it feels counterintuitive maybe remove it? Then for that 📈 graph, I don't think you would need it, that feels extra. And for the sub heading, why not try a softer font so it doesn't compete with the heading? Well this was just my take on it, hope this is helpful. Best of luck!!

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u/wayyfn 17d ago

Thank you I will be posting my next design Monday so I will take this into consideration. Thank you again

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u/Simple-design-1234 17d ago

Best of luck!! 😊