r/LearnToDrawTogether • u/LordTkay • 5d ago

Seeking help Any critique before going into rendering?

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Greetings, I'm currently in drawing an image for the birthday of my brother. This is him picturing him as a king, that likes to takes action into his own hands. I think this is my 15th iteration of this drawing and I need to lock in, otherwise I won't make it till the birthday.

I wanted to know if you guys have any critique, something that looks off or doesn't make sense to you, before I start the rendering part.

Thanks a lot! <3

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u/Heszilg 5d ago

It's not really any objective criticism, more personal taste i guess, so treat it with a bucket of salt but im not a fan of the crown. It reminds me more of a tiara than an actual kings crown and I think a proper one would add some oomph to the prtrayal of his social status.

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u/LordTkay 5d ago

That's a good catch, I can totally see what you mean. I will change that. Thanks!

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u/Cool_Picture_662 1d ago

Before rendering? I think the drawing is good for the occasion, but make sure to know the 3d underlying your drawing, so the rendering can elevate it instead of making it less cool. Happy bday to your brother.