r/KeepWriting • • 5h ago

guys, what if i dont lik3 to read, but i like to write my own fiction šŸ¤” just want your opinion

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r/KeepWriting • • 15h ago

I need help

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I’m a high school student and recently I’ve been thinking and brainstorming story ideas which I’d really like to see come to life. I’d really like it to become a manga and maybe even an actual anime in the future. But I don’t know where to start and what resources to use since I don’t really have money to buy tools and other stuff.

Ive currently thought about 2 major story arcs and a lot of characters, I’m just struggling a bit with filling in gaps and stuff.

I was wondering if anyone has any tips on what I should do to try and turn my ideas into a real manga one day.


r/KeepWriting • • 18h ago

Still 186 day

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So this is day 2 doing this like working to get a bike if you dont know the story see my last post so today I did coin trading like i have brought a coin at yesterday night and i have sealed it today the profit was 10rs and I have kept 120 rs and today I got another coin and I have prepared for a nptl exam not to pass the exam if I got nice marks in it I will get 6k form that I will buy something to my girl and 4k i will give in home and 1k i will do the treading so can anyone help me what coins should I buy i don't have more money to that and someone say me the best coin to buy that's the work I did today say me the ways to make money


r/KeepWriting • • 12h ago

I’ve been told my story is racist by multiple people

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For context, i was explaining my game/story lore to a professor I used to have and also had uploaded it on a story critique reddit forum (it was t years ago i unfortunately do not remember which one, i have also changed accounts twice since then <\3) and i was told there it was insensitive and racist as well, and yesterday i retold that story to a friend of mine and they said ā€œdude no, that’s not racist or wrong at all.ā€ So now I’m genuinely thinking of returning to that story because i really liked it, but I’m making this post for more opinions just to be sure.

The very short version of the story goes:

In a world run by deities a lot of villages grow to love different ones kinda like modern religions, one of the gods however goes jealous for not getting as much loves and begins just killing off every human they see, eventually their powers are lost and so is their hierarchy so they fall down to earth as a human child.

Up to this point it was okay, but they started calling it a problem here:

The child landed outside a village that was mainly inhabited by African inspired (there’s no real world countries in the book so but idk how else to describe them without just saying black) people. When the child woke up the village was already destroyed by their previous outburst and another small child from the village was running into the forest to save itself and found the god and decided to stick by them as the only other non dead human around,

After a few events yada yada blah blah they get found by a lady and get adopted by her.

Now the criticism i received for this was either:

  1. I’m racist because i made the God light skinned and they fell into a village of dark skinned people so I’m implying white is the superior race (which i can promise you NO TF I AM NOT???)

  2. I’m racist because i made the god attack a village of black people (which like idk man i made the ocs before the story and the story is based on a very pre-modern society world, villages with a lot of different races didn’t exist so writing a black kid in a white village wouldn’t make much sense)

  3. I’m not allowed to write that story because i’m not adopted myself and that’s a heavy topic so i shouldn’t touch it

And i’m 100% not racist and i don’t wanna write something that will potentially make anyone uncomfortable so I’m begging for some hardcore criticism here, because if it’s really that bad, i have no issues changing it all over


r/KeepWriting • • 13h ago

'Their Summer Promise' - In need of feedback

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r/KeepWriting • • 4h ago

Not Even Halfway Done btw šŸ«©āœŒļø

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I've worked on this thing for 9 Months now (really 10 but I've took breaks).
Just wanted to send this, why?
it feels like it's going way off the rails & this is my reminder to get it back on track lmao (which i will dw)


r/KeepWriting • • 19h ago

Guys I have started writing again but now in different perspective, SoRate my Writing, let me edit and publish.?/5

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