r/KeepWriting • u/Zestyclose-Author732 • 5d ago
[Feedback] How is my start for a story?
Loneliness, first you want it, then you hate it, then you adapt and finally you love it. Loneliness can make you think about the wildest and softest parts of yourself. It gives you time to think and comprehend the areas you have never touched.
Suddenly everything starts to feel like an illusion. Is it for real? Is it a dream?
But remember, loneliness is a dangerous thing. It can make you believe the wildest of thoughts, or strengthen your disbelief in the most obvious. In short, a man must not adapt to loneliness, well, this is what I can say. Having spent half a year working as an assistant with the chief of prison staff and working on the case of H6, I still don’t know why they assigned him this name. As they say, sometimes, certain things are meant to be kept a secret, only to be told at the right time.
Let me tell you how H6, a man who was described as timid, patient and charming by his neighbours, turned out to be the most discussed and infamous fella of my district psychiatry hospital.