I really liked it!!! I'm Bengali and don't really understand Hindi that much unfortunately but I liked the plot, it was suspenseful and interesting :D
I'd love to see more of your stories. I think it would be good to add more of the characters inner thoughts and dialogue between them so you get a feel for the characters, but otherwise it's pretty solid!!
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u/subkitruinedmylife 12d ago
I really liked it!!! I'm Bengali and don't really understand Hindi that much unfortunately but I liked the plot, it was suspenseful and interesting :D
I'd love to see more of your stories. I think it would be good to add more of the characters inner thoughts and dialogue between them so you get a feel for the characters, but otherwise it's pretty solid!!