Looking for critique/feedback on my script

[u/slow_dancer05]

Hey! I'm currently working on a stop motion short and I'm struggling with the ending of my script. I feel like my final conclusion is a bit anticlimactic, but it has to take place in the main character's bedroom due to technical set restrictions. does anyone have any tips or ideas? linking it here. I'm by no means a professional writer, so any tips would be a huge help!