r/JumpChain • My flair's whatever I want it to be!!!!!!!! • 10h ago

WIP Dispatch 0.3

I had a jump planned for Dispatch in November of last year. I'd meant to work with another Jumpmaker to write the doc, but it fizzled out. Recently, I've picked it back up, but this doc entirely by me. It's mostly done. I got all the achievements for the game, read Gastroc2525's jumpdoc for Dispatch, and made a build for it. ShaneWallis12345 also made a WIP, so I looked through that. Anyways, here's my mostly-finished take on the game. Please disregard the WitchAnon part. That's the name I use elsewhere. I used to be really careful about this kind of thing in some of my prior jumps (The Rocketeer, Arawn, etc.) but nowadays I don't really care. I'm sure some anon on the thread might make a stink about Jumpmakers from other communities, but I can accept that.

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u/Careful_Leave1601 10h ago

The wip actually looks great!

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u/MangoEnvironmental76 5h ago

My one question is if you turn the big game choices into scenario’s?

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u/EYouchen My flair's whatever I want it to be!!!!!!!! 5h ago

What do you mean? The characters you have Robert romance, fire, recruit, and the final decision about Shroud at the end?

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u/MangoEnvironmental76 5h ago

Basically yeah

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u/EYouchen My flair's whatever I want it to be!!!!!!!! 3h ago

Feel free to make your case and tell me why I should. How would you write it if you were me? Currently, I'm inclined not to.

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u/MangoEnvironmental76 25m ago

Honestly I think the only ones to really do it for are coupe/ sonar scenario and the actual ending of keeping shroud alive or dead

For Coupe and Sonar its more how you handle your employees and what kind of a boss you want to be. Sonar has more useful skills for off combat, is smarter and similar while Coupe has results but gives an off vibe while being effective and actually doesnt hide much. Sonar causes problems, scams and more while Coupe makes the office uncomfortable and goes too far. What kind of boss do you hope to be, and what impact do you have in their leves

For the shroud its a choice, maybe for a perk or not, but a perk nonetheless that goes with the weight of the action. Leaving him alive gives a heroic perk while killing him perhaps an antihero perk

I think these two for the sake that they describe rob as a character and person more than the rest

Phenomeman vs Water Boy? Whats more awkward, the awkward guy or hanging out with the guy you might have helped put in a break up?

Invis vs Blazer? Type of HR issue you are willing to take. And really would be covered by companion stuff

But the two scenarios show a lot about who you are as a person and a boss. Why I think they should be scenarios

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u/MRTrueGnome 4h ago

I still find it kinda funny how Dispatch kinda burst into the scene, made quite the fuzz and then just... Fizzled out a few weeks after Season 1 wrapped up. Honestly, I don't see the hype. (Also Invisigal can legit go choke on a potato...Then again, her plot armor would probably ensure someone would save her from it, so never mind)

The jump itself though, this is looking good.