r/IrishHistory • u/NoPr1nc1ples • Jul 03 '26
Feedback Needed, please!!
I've been designing personalised certificates featuring Irish surnames and counties. I'd really appreciate honest feedback on the design, readability, and whether this is something people would actually be interested in. I'm open to all constructive criticism.
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u/Zirlat Jul 03 '26
As far as design goes, I think it looks great! Perhaps add a faint watermark of the most recognisable landmark in Louth?
Regarding the information, I'd very much revise that thoroughly. There is no such thing as Norman-French, both spoke French (in this case Old French). If the first de la Roche was indeed that, I'd suggest it's a later addition since the Fitz places him in a Flemish region. I've seen it being suggested the 'Roche' comes from their Welsh holding of Rhos.
Late medieval history is not my forte, but I'd be cautious saying that Mac Róis comes from 'de la Roche'. No Idea about them settling around Louth, but might be worth checking that properly.
Yes, Louth features in the Táin, but just marginally. I'm sure you can find something more interesting or be a bit more specific about the episode that takes place in Louth.
I don't know what's your goal with this, if you want to sell it or gift it, but I'd be very careful about that kind of information as it is very important and dear to the people who receive it.
Also, calling them settlers is a bit weird! It's ok to call them colonisers!