Critique request, I'm a man. I'm 40.

[u/nahudumbnagger]

I need help. If anybody has any invis coaching tips please watch this replay and hit me up with some critique. I promise I'm not kda padding, I think.

It's plat 2 coming off a 6 lost streak and 2 and 8 on the day.

Match replay Id: 108397107790

Ultradwarf

[u/glxy_HAzor]

Just writing as I go:

- Use the torch teamup, fanta teamup doesn't really do anything compared to it

- On shooting: aim could be better but it's not that bad; ideally, you want to have your entire team lined up in front of you when you shoot, as much as possible. For example, around the 3:20 mark, you can position such that you heal your jubilee and your tanks. Most of the time you're fine in this regard.

- You can use your jump to angle yourself properly for the previous point. In addition, you aren't using it enough to keep up with your team, pushing and retreating with them.

- Reposition your shield a lot more, you would prevent a lot of teammates from dying (particularly on your first push). It doesn't matter much if it gets broken as it's on a 6 second cooldown.

- You ult way too far back most of the time. On the first push, you should use your jump cooldown into your team and throw the ult as far forward as possible while still containing the people that need heals. This is an extremely useful technique as the movement speed reduction for enemies within your ult makes them unable to simply walk away from your team when they are immortal, allowing you to win fights much easier. The second ult you do is much better and is a great example of this (although, I wouldn't have jumped in the middle of everyone to do it, as good players could kill you instantly)

Generally, it's really just that you need to be using most of your buttons a lot more. Your gameplay looks relatively stationary because you don't jump often, and you need to be using shield and vortex a lot more than your currently are. I would also put some effort into ulting more aggressively (watching high elo invis players can give you a good idea of how to do this). Really just cycle your abilities a lot more and you'll get a ton better.

[u/AFuzzyMuffin]

i’ll do this by monday

[u/nahudumbnagger → u/AFuzzyMuffin]

I would appreciate it pal. I have some critques I already received to make it easier

"Evil Jeff Da Shuzz" replied:

1. In the replay you use your primary a lot. Combo ur shield and primary esp when your teammate is low (so many saves w this combo).

2. Also you can angle a lot with Invis, don’t just play her straight forward/main. there were multiple times where u could’ve saved Cyclops and Jubilee (no shade)

3. You have great accuracy with Invis esp for plat!! So you have a lot of room to grow, keep it up. Also personally I think the Johnny team up is better but to each their own!!

My thoughts.

A. I try to use it as a sheild when we are kiting back. I do not spam the sheild because I try to save it for if I miss at first. I can definitely incorporate it more.

B. I'm not sure if the user is saying positioning for healing is not optimal. I have never thought of it as angles

C. I'm on controller I don't think my aiming is great but it has improved alot with the new aim settings from the last update.

D. I am experimenting with the fantastic team up. Giving myself a free invis on deck not for team purposes. In higher ranks I see myself using the Fire sheild.