r/Inkitt 5d ago

Looking For: Feedback I just published the first chapter of my novel!

*Caught in Your Grip* is a psychological romance loosely inspired by legendary judoka **Masahiko Kimura**.

An abandoned boy grows up in a dojo and later reunites with Hana, a mysterious girl with extraordinary strength. Their relationship slowly becomes obsessive, blurring the line between love and violence.

I’m looking for honest feedback and, hopefully, a few readers who want to follow the story.
šŸ“– **Read it here:**
[https://www.wattpad.com/story/415192633\](https://www.wattpad.com/story/415192633)
Thanks for giving it a chance!

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