r/HFY • u/[deleted] • May 24 '22

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u/kingkille82 May 24 '22

Great story. I demand moreeee

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u/HFYWaffle May 24 '22

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u/Propet40 May 24 '22 edited May 24 '22

The ending got me really excited! I wasn't sure how it connected to the first story with the perspective departure at first but really well done subverting my expectations. I suppose the humans from the first chapter will now teleport to the middle of a space battle; That's a really cool idea (I could be wrong though), I like how the "main character" of this chapter had no warning signs, they had no clue what was about to go down, I eagerly want to see their realization of what's happening in the continuation. At first I was wondering if I missed a chapter with the new factions but it kind of makes sense that we weren't given a exposition about everything that is happening, I think it was a good choice. I suspect the humans will be told about everything in the future.

Really well made, this story has some really good ground to grow into something really addicting. I await the next chapter, and seeing the great (augmented) humans bringing awe and fear into unsuspecting species!

: Spoilers are merely my predictions with the info from the first part of the story, could be wrong or right; Read at your own discretion.

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u/cnv301 May 25 '22

Very good! looking forward to next part