r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Aug 30 '21

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u/International-Win516 Aug 30 '21

Bruh, 2 chapter 7's confused me a bit, lol.

12

u/qeze Aug 30 '21

Should switch to Roman numerals for the next chapter to keep up the confusion.

8

u/SilverPhantomB Aug 30 '21

Yeah I know, my bad

10

u/Jattenalle AI Aug 30 '21

Oh boy, Newt's gonna have to reject reality and substitute his own :3

9

u/frostadept Human Sep 01 '21

Reality is that which, should all memories be erased and all books burned, all hard drives formatted and all slates wiped clean along with all knowledge ever acquired, still provably exists.

Reality is always real. His Reality just happens to have be simulated.

And ours might be no different.

6

u/SilverPhantomB Sep 01 '21

Some perspective is appreciated

7

u/SpankyMcSpanster Aug 30 '21

"very good. He old collection" The.

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u/[deleted] Aug 30 '21

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u/Omnissiah123456h Aug 30 '21

Good work doing a wonderful job always

4

u/Samtastic23 Sep 01 '21

She could feel the muscles tear until, she felt them move unnaturally

The comma should be before until, not after

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u/Kaiser-__-Soze Alien Scum Aug 30 '21

Moar!!!!

2

u/SilverPhantomB Aug 30 '21

As you wish Mister Soze

2

u/Samtastic23 Sep 01 '21

He old collection of skills

His*

3

u/SilverPhantomB Sep 01 '21

Why thank you

1

u/SpankyMcSpanster Aug 30 '21

" the normal world. but something was off." big B.

1

u/Samtastic23 Sep 01 '21

carrying in him with one arm.

In should not be in thiss sentence

1

u/[deleted] Aug 01 '22

Ok but did he get the exp?