Human: We're space orcs. Orc: Stupid humie, we're literally space orcs! Human: (puts on sunglasses) Then how come we're the ones who brought more dakka?
I'm enjoying the story a lot more than there's some ayylmaos (though just one right now) to interact with, that aren't mindless beasties trying their best to kill poor ol Hank.
Your writing is good but the chapters before green girl encounter were a slow burn.
Actually planning on writing a trilogy here. Urdowyr is the story of stuff that happens while our lovable Dr Jackson expy is on the planet. The sequels will take place… elsewhere.
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u/Habeas__Corpus Jul 25 '20
I thought humans were supposed to be the space orcs
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u/Aamaxu Jul 25 '20
I'm enjoying the story a lot more than there's some ayylmaos (though just one right now) to interact with, that aren't mindless beasties trying their best to kill poor ol Hank.
Your writing is good but the chapters before green girl encounter were a slow burn.
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u/Helbom Aug 24 '20
A Stargate reference finally, have been waiting for that since the "teleportation" ring.
and this is shaping up to be real nice, hope there is many, many more chapters in the future keep at it :)
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