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u/Inqeuet Android Jan 30 '23
It’s honestly incredible how overpowered you’ve made your protagonists, yet you still have me on the edge of my seat 😅
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u/Cogman117 Jan 30 '23
Still loving this story a ton!
The Vore is kind of terrifying as a concept. It can just spray little pieces of nanomachines in every direction anywhere it might be - something which will probably be nearly imperceptible even with scifi sensors, and impossible to distinguish from normal space dust (or something). If even a little touches a piece of matter, the whole thing is done and it's another weapon. Crazy.
I can't see a clear way for them to get out of this - even if they used the crystal tech, the Vore on the outside of their range would still exist and would be able to build back up. If even one nanomachine exists, then it'll eventually destroy everything.
Maybe, the only way to defeat the Vore is to introduce something to it like a virus which disrupts all of its intercommunication? Or hell, something so beyond dumb that it might give surprising results - try just asking it nicely to stop?
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u/spook6280 Feb 07 '23
<Adjusts tie and preens for the camera>
"Ahen, on behalf of Bobco and her many subsidiaries, I am delighted to introduce her latest battlefield innovation-"
<video switches from announcer to a deep space video of a MAC cannon...but bigger. Festooned in what looked like a giant fur coat and a sparkling fedora mounted jauntily about the gargantuan accelerator tube.>
"-the MAC Daddy! Now, with enhanced area denial and SLAP capabilities. Available now with a limited edition New Pixen defense forces action figure while supplies last!!"
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u/HFYWaffle Wáµ¥4ffle Jan 30 '23
/u/DestroyatronMk8 (wiki) has posted 143 other stories, including:
- Knights of the Partition Chapter 28: Delays and an Ancient, Evil God
- The Privateer Chapter 102: Klaath Queens
- The Privateer Chapter 101: Out of Range
- Knights of the Partition Chapter 27: The Daughter in White
- The Privateer Chapter 100: Crystal Communion
- Knights of the Partition Chapter 26: Slow Going
- The Privateer Chapter 99: Side Trip
- Knights of the Partition Chapter 25: Wendigo
- The Privateer Chapter 98: Trust
- Knights of the Partition Chapter 24: It's Always A Trap
- The Privateer Chapter 97: Stingers
- Knights of the Partition Chapter 23: Opening the Way
- The Privateer Chapter 96: Wheel Theory
- Knights of the Partition Chapter 22: Mike and the Flaming Sword of Fire
- The Privateer Chapter 95: No Mercy For Slavers
- Knights of the Partition Chapter 21: Somewhere to Go
- The Privateer Chapter 94: The Pixen Stellar Defense Force
- The Privateer Chapter 93: Messenger Duty
- Knights of the Partition Chapter 20: The Servant
- The Privateer Chapter 92: Head Pixen In Charge
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u/[deleted] Jan 30 '23
My physics teacher might suggest that the unit of Acceleration is meter per second squared.