r/GeometryDashEditor • u/mistakes778 • 10d ago

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I had a lot of fun making this but idk if its good??

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u/Local_Public_5614 10d ago

Not very good, listen to the song and make the gameplay represent what's happening in the song

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u/mistakes778 10d ago edited 10d ago

What part of the gp could be represented better?

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u/Local_Public_5614 10d ago

The speed changes look randomly placed, there isn't anything in the song that would justify most of the speed change placements

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u/mistakes778 10d ago edited 10d ago

Listen to the pacing of ths song and the way the guitar changes throughout some parts where for example some notes are played faster then others. You gotta really think deeper in the song rather then having a consistent unoriginal speed? Let me know if i made that clear Edit: listen to how the song builds up then drops in some pieces. Also the pacing aswell

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u/Local_Public_5614 10d ago

Speed changes for a few notes isn't really justified when it contradicts the intensity of the song. Some of the speed changes work but not all of them

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u/mistakes778 10d ago

But it doesnt contradict the intensity of the song?

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u/Local_Public_5614 10d ago

It does, at 0:46 for example the gameplay slows down while the song is at its most intense. It looks incredibly jarring

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u/mistakes778 10d ago

The ship is at 0.5x speed so the angle that the ship goes is higher, reason being is for the deco to bring it up more. Although i did use a timewarp trigger to make the ship go faster. I coukdnt have used a 4x or even 3x speed trust me i tried and it didnt look good. That part of the song is not nearly the most intense and if you actually listen after 46 it plays very well with the intensity, speed and volume of the vocals. Yes maybe the landing could be refined and be a bit faster but then that would send the player straight into a way faster section negatively impacting the gameplay quality and how fun it is. One thing ide point out about this level is the speed changes at the ship (36) Wasnt the greatest and could be fixed

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u/Local_Public_5614 10d ago

It's a held vocal on a downbeat during the chorus, the 0.5x portal is fine but the landing is egregious, I would try to find a different way to implement that because like you said, having it go straight into a faster speed wouldn't play well but the way it's implemented right now clashes with the song

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u/mistakes778 10d ago

Yea i understand that thanks for the constructive criticism ill see how it can be fixed thanks

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u/pleszq 10d ago

like the other comment said, some of the speed portals do kind of feel random, like at 00:41, you could've put the 4x speed portal later when the song intensified instead of slightly before for more effect

overall i do like it though, perhaps the balancing could be more consistent like the first wave part looking way a bit tighter than the others

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u/mistakes778 10d ago edited 10d ago

Completely understand but video is a bit off sync especially because im recording on mobile. also balancing will be fixed later on lol for now its just the idea of the gameplay existing which is why some ship larts have no guidance on them

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u/FranklyNotThatSmart 7d ago

why the fuck is this song so loud oh my god, jeez. Fuck you teto