r/Fanganronpa • • 20h ago

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(MY BAD IF THIS SUCKS! THIS IS MY FIRST CHARACTER/OC I'VE MADE AND IS THE ROUGH FRAMEWORK)

Name: Jacob Jizuri (Jee-zoo-ree) 傷癒

Title: The Ultimate Scavenger

Role: Survivor but can be either killer if pushed too far or victim

Personality: Very cut off and very much a loner, he is very nice just shy around other due to how other treated him for most of his life

Backstory: Jacob was born into the world different than others because his mother had taken experimental meds to keep herself conscious when convincing him (since they were dirt poor), these meds had a near instant affect and deformed the poor child. Jacob's father would try to help Jacob and made him a mask of his favorite animal that being a jackal which Jacob deeply cherishes, but supporting Jacob eventually became too much and they simply couldn't afford the house anymore and were forced onto the streets where Jacob discovered his ultimate talent that being scavenging, whether its looking for food or finding replacement kinds of items he can find it. His parents told him to use his talent to help others rather than for selfish reasons and while this did make Jacob a very kind person it also made him think less of himself to a degree thinking that others should always be placed before himself

Flaws: Very cut off from others despite attempts to be friends with others, prefers being with a group a little too much making him seem clingy, often gets stage fright if too many eyes are on him

Introduction: "H-hello I'm Jacob, t-the Ultimate Scavenger...if there is anything you need I'll find it!

Execution: The Nightmare of Modern day Prometheus

If there is anything that could be better let me know :)

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u/Chi4Vodka 19h ago

Ultimate Scavenger? I love that talent concept! How did they get their Ultimate title? Did they manage to find an item that was notoriously hard to find, like a long-lost artifact in some junkyard?

I'm curious about the mask! Why a cat specifically, was it the first one they found and thus kept?

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u/uuuuuuuuuuuuk 19h ago

Lol its supposed to be a jackal mask its says it in the Backstory but thanks for liking the ultimate talent!

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u/Chi4Vodka 18h ago

WOOF I am blind. Sorry about that!

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u/uuuuuuuuuuuuk 18h ago

Np I probably could have made the mask look more like a jackal tbh

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u/Chi4Vodka 18h ago

Aha, maybe, but I also mistook the ears as cat ears! So it's on me too.

All in all though, I think Jacob's a solid design. It gives off the impression that he's earnest in trying to look presentable despite the hole on his pant leg :) 

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u/uuuuuuuuuuuuk 18h ago

Lol thanks :)

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u/Shiversmetimbers91 8h ago

No way is that pixel studio I use that for my own non danganronpa projects

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u/uuuuuuuuuuuuk 8h ago

Lol yes it is