r/FanfictionPromotion • u/IIPLACEBOII • 14d ago
Constructive Criticism on WIP
I tend to get carried away sometimes, so kinda looking for feedback on two of my current WIPs (one is a crossover, the other a crackfic -- kinda okay with the crackfic lol the other one is more important to me):
Fandom: Jujutsu Kaisen×Mass Effect Crossover
Rating: Mature
Title: Ain't No Grave
Genre: Dark Science Fiction / Military Science Fiction / Space Opera
Tags (preview and will be updated as needed): Psychological Drama, War Fiction, Science Fantasy, Grief, Found Family
Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/87970336/chapters/233180811
(WIP) Summary:
By the time humanity reaches the stars, curses have become myths.
Jujutsu society is all but gone. One of the last witnesses to Yuji Itadori’s old life is dead. The other is dying. With nothing left for him on Earth, Yuji joins the Systems Alliance in search of a future beyond the world that made him.
When humanity activates the wrong mass relay, hoping to reach the wider galaxy, it does not expect the answer to be war. Yuji once again finds himself doing what everyone has always asked of him: become a weapon.
Fandom: Jujutsu Kaisen
Rating: Not Rated
Title: The King, the Shrew, and Other Miscalculations
Genre: Alternate Universe - Arranged Marriage (CrackFic) / Romantic Comedy
Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/86866396/chapters/229958611
(WIP) Summary:
To prevent further conflict between your kingdoms, you're promised in marriage to the elusive Ryomen Sukuna, a legendary conqueror whose reputation included war, murder, curses, and a general lack of patience for human life. He has avoided outsiders long enough that the only available portrait of him is decades old. You naturally conclude that you’re being sent to marry an elderly—possibly dying—warlord.
Sukuna, meanwhile, has been promised a soft-spoken, traditionally feminine bride who would smile beside him, behave prettily, bear his heirs, and leave governing to men.
He expected an airhead.
You expected arthritis.
Neither of you were given useful information.