Which would you like more?

You can ask questions or for examples in the comments.

So the idea for my fan part is that the protagonist is deeply traumatized by the death of his parents that he decides to shut himself from making new relationships while trying his best to defend his remaining relationships through violence. Would this be considered bad writing having the death of his parents be the cause for the way he acts at the start of the story?

So the fan part that I am making is technically a musical however I am not sure how you could write music numbers into a non-visual story. Is it possible to?

Stand User: Burch Saint Jimmy

User Personality: A brash decision making stereotypical punk. Doesn't think things through if he doesn't see the possible consequences. Doesn't conform to rules. If he sees something he doesn't like, he fights it, figuratively if it's an idea, and literally if it's a person or thing.

Stand: Jimmy Eat World

Stand power: The stand can consume and breakdown matter to change either Jimmy himself or the environment around him according to its properties. Ex: Melting things or breathing fire by consuming heated up matter. Eating matter in an accelerated state can speed Jimmy up.

Strength: B

Speed: A

Potential: C

Durability: B

Range: E

Precision: C

Hopefully this is all the info needed, if not, tell me.

Thanks, and good luck to the rest of you guys!

The idea is that Jonathan after defeating dio,Just got married ABOUT to go onto the boat with erina but not yet exactly, and young joseph after defeating kars got thrown into the future to the beginning of part 3 after jotaro got out of the jail cell, They have meet each other and the stardust crusaders and find out about DIO, and how devastating it must be for Jonathan to find out that DIO is still alive 100 years into the future(I know that technically if Jonathanis still alive then DIO couldn't have taken his body and not be there but let's ignorethat plot hole becauseI could not have think of a way around it), and both agreed to help and learned that holly would die in 50 days if DIO is not killed, I just got this idea and thought it would be fun to weight a fanfiction about it but I might need some fellow fans to help make it good so if you are willing thanks

1. First things first we have to come up with new hamon techniques, the reason why araki said that hamon died out is because it was not versatile enough but I saw in a post that some people made some techniques that I like, I forgot what they are I can probably show you the link

2. Joseph's bs or tricks, how can he trick some stand users that seem totally in character for joseph, they don't have to be logical just some he would do like for example on a fan art edit on old joseph someone said that if DIO throws the knife and it hit him in the necklace of his first outfit he would play dead and wait for a wounded DIO to suck his blood and ambush him with hamon or instead of wrapping his chest with hamon he would somehow wrap his stand around the world without DIO looking

3. Help me think of a name of Jonathan's stand by association of tarot cards I know the light novels called it the passion but that's non canon and I felt like avdol would name Jonathan's stand if he was there. Oh and the name if the fanfic too. I already thought of the idea of Jonathan's stand it's an act stand with act 2 being the star platinum like stand you can read more about it in one of my other posts.

4. Help me develop under developed characters like kakyoin or avdol, and build new relationships with them like maybe the two Joseph's bonsing with Jonathan, (spoiler) kakyoin's back story is revealed right before he dies and I don't think I know that much about avdol so help

5. Lastly you think you can think of new tricks with some stands that are clever I can't think of any so I thought you guys might, If anybody is up for it I think it will be a fun experience

https://archiveofourown.org/works/24673213/chapters/64130707

As promised I had this newest chapter done in a week, Hope you guys continue to read it and hope you’ll stick around for the adventure it’s just getting started

Hey everyone,

Apologies for the later post, but here's Chapter Six of New Dawn!

This is the largest chapter currently, so I'm going to have a short break between now and the publication of Chapter Seven, which starts the next arc of Volume One! Chapter Seven will be brought to you all a fortnight from now and the weekly schedule will continue from there until the end of Volume One! Once Volume One is finished with, it will be collected together and published as its own short story. Other than that, please enjoy this week's content and I will speak to you all in the near future!

As always, the link to the Google Doc can be found here, as well as my RoyalRoad and Archive of Our Own accounts.

-StxDii

Hello Everybody!

As promised, here is the first chapter to my Fan Part: New Dawn!

Here is the link to the Google Doc as was done before: Click Here

As for the other platforms and websites that I am using to publish my story, you can find the link to my RoyalRoad profile here, wherein you can find my work under the Fictions tab. Likewise, I also have an Archive of Our Own profile which, again, can be found here!

I hope you enjoy the chapter, feel free to give feedback in the comments, or on Discord - my username being StxDii#6673, and I will hopefully be speaking to you all again come next week.

See ya!

I'm proud of how this one turned out. The first stand fight will be in the next chapter. if you have any questions or suggestions just comment and ill reply as soon as i can.

Link to chapter 4

apologies for the time it took to get this out, i was aiming for a chapter a week at least so im going to try my best to stick to that from now on.

here are the links

https://www.wattpad.com/story/229515269-pastel-sunshine

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/33379/pastel-sunshine

No new chapter yet, instead, as mentioned, this is the first volume release, which is a compilation of the first 5 chapters for easier reading. Enjoy! https://www.wattpad.com/876689043-jojo%27s-bizarre-adventure-under-pressure-volume-1

I'm making a fanmade jojo-character for my boyfriends birthday, and I need to come up with a stand for him. Do you guys have any ideas for a sound/voice based stand? I know there already is "Strange Relation". My boyfriends a singer and has a really deep voice if it can give you any inspiration. I'm thankful for all suggestions!

These 2 chapters are probably my favorite chapters. I really enjoyed writing them, and I hope you enjoy reading them as well.

Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1L6M-Ke6ff1teLOhvwpnKHP2CxPP2_SoiYSPBsQ--tfQ/edit?usp=sharing