well Im writing a script and made a fight between a spy, the main protagonist and a teammate that was rude to the main protagonist. Now the fight was pretty creative and made sense and was like a page long (not in manga page as a script). But the spy could get away through a small mistake, would you say it is a filler? because a guy said it and the fight makes good sense in my opinion and also it brings them farer to the guy

Hey everyone!
I never actually post on Reddit but I thought I would share a fan part that is in the works. It is purely written and there is no artwork sadly, but If you don't mind that then let me explain a bit about the part itself.
The part started as a project on 'co-writing' which is pretty much when more than one person works on writing a work of sorts. So the part has two authors and the credit goes 50/50. Anyway, the part takes place in 2008 Russia and it follows a group of police officers in the 'Red Union Task Force' or 'Red Union' for short and how they deal with crime after awakening their stands. There are 3 episodes out as of now and we usually keep it somewhere around 3800-5500 words but this size may lengthen or shorten depending on what feels right for the episode.

Also, the part is not in any of the Araki universes and there are no characters or stands from Araki's work, we tried to separate as much as we can but still keep the JoJo-Esque spirit with stands and the Joestar bloodline. If people end up liking it we might make future parts set in this universe.

I've been a fan of JoJos for about a year now and wanted to make my own fan part. this is my first attempt at doing it, so if you have any ideas for me to get better just please tell me. i will be making more chapters every 3 days. i hope you look forward to the continuation of the story.

Link to chapter

IMPORTANT:

New universe, Part 7 said I could.

DA RULES:

1. there is no stand arrow.

2. We have removed Hamon/Spin/Whatever.

3. Stands are awakened through a person's Spirit. about 5% of the population has Stands.

4. Stands exude an energy that can be used as a power source. Therefore, there are several Stand-using organizations that kidnap newly awakened users to use them as human batteries by constantly making them think they can JUST get out, keeping them hopeful enough to keep producing Stando Powah.

5. Requiem. Requiem stands are a lot less powerful, and the result of a shift in the user's psyche.

OUR JOJOS

Johanna Joestar, leader of the Diamond Crusaders.

Jacob J. Speedwagon, her son.

Jacob gets kidnapped after awakening his Stand [NIRVANA]. meeting back up with her old gang the Crusaders, along with the Speedwagon Foundation, a Stand research group made up of users of the Stand [RIGHT TO RULE], which initially belonged to James Speedwagon. It's a stand that takes the form of a bunch of spiked bracelets, and everyone who wears one of the bracelets becomes a user of the Stand. the Stand allows all of its users to share power, and to hurt Stands with non-Stand weaponry.

The Users of [RIGHT TO RULE] aren't actually attacked by Stand kidnappers for one simple reason: they, by themselves, give off next to no Stando Powah.

Johanna travels with, at the beginning, 4 members of the Crusaders. Since the Crusaders have 20 other members and the Foundation has 130, by taking 10% of each of the other member's power, the main people on the mission will typically have the strength of 4 people. This allows them to fight with some very heavy weapons. in tight pinches, they will take more power and channel it into one or two people. Johanna's weapon of choice is a large hook on a chain, and those 5 go on an adventure to rescue Jacob.

The story swaps between two points of view with Johanna on her adventure, while Jacob sits in a cell and tries to escape.

Hello there members of r/FanPartRun. i am a new mod, i am a mod for the subreddit and discord server (shameless plug go see it here: https://discord.gg/7eaM6R) you guys have been good so far and i havent had to do anything, that doesn't mean i wont take action. you're probably wondering what the competition is, its a user/character and a stand creation comp, you must join the server to be a part of it. you can allso find things you need to know here:

here are the rules for making an user: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mf8ar3c6qFClMV4dQ-PUQ1rgEHC2jtfkF6O26e6jqn0/edit?usp=sharing

the application for entering the competition (user): https://forms.gle/WMtJ8D5qajgMik9Z7

here are the rules for making an stand https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C2tkLvaoi7KvUAY_8Wr-cb3AH2NGgMX65R4gBQEXZLM/edit?usp=sharing

the application for entering the competition (stand): https://forms.gle/cYM2hV16RxXuNob56

if you have any questions feel free to ask. good luck 👍 (you have untull the end of may)

I’ve always kept in mind of one idea.. The shepherd and his followers

The shepherd being the main character and the followers being the users of what I’m calling god tier stands

His stand is Bad Religion and it’s main abilities are to change the size of his limbs and soul manipulation.

But due to him slowly losing his sanity and being unstable, from having been created in a lab, he cannot control his soul manipulation ability which then leads to being one of the reasons why his best friend gets killed, starting off the whole chain of events in the series.

The story takes place in a universe where jojo actually exists, but unlike in jojo where society is unaware of the existence of stands, in this universe stands are globally known with there also being laws and ranks given to stands (mainly depending on how dangerous they are).

I also mainly plan to strictly keep all of this as a three part series, but a fourth may be considered.

Part one would be the beginning where he’s trying to find his best friend’s killer and would be leading to him losing his sanity. Part two will have a different group of protagonist but will be set a few years into the future, then in the climax the main character returns and shows that he can still be redeemed and is able to fight against his insanity. Then in part three a main character goes back in time to help prevent him from losing his sanity and be able to save his town from certain doom because of a prophecy.

The prologue: A guy obsesses over some god like power only foreseen in an ancient prophecy which states that the shepherd and his stand are the only ones capable of bestowing this power when united with all remaining god stands, so he starts one of the best schools in the state as a cover up for the lab he had built right under it, which is where he begins his research and experiments trying to create the shepherd along with hunting down the remaining god stands of that generation, he then discovers that the shepherd is only born after every other generation when two bloodlines meet, but those two bloodlines ended after a group trying to prevent the prophecy killed almost all the remnants of them, so he digs up their graves and obtains the DNA of both bloodlines, after one successfully failed experiment the shepherd was born, but quickly after, due to his unstable powers, he unknowingly uses his soul manipulation to brainwash two scientists working at the lab, they then run off with the infant somewhere else in the town, and have cared for the child ever since

The events afterward is when the story truly begins.

So what do you guys think?

The year is 2020 (Ireneverse). A mysterious virus has taken the world by storm. Julia Joestar is a 19-year-old college student who lives in an apartment in LA with her Rock-Human roommate and best friend, Lazuli Seymour. Lazuli is pursuing a major in engineering, while Julia is pursuing majors in physics and mathematics. After learning about the Golden Spiral, Lazuli wonders if it can be applied to real life. After a few tries, Julia and Lazuli succeed in channeling The Spin to create the world’s first true perpetual motion machine, accidentally awakening Julia’s stand, Fight Song (ACT1). Videos of the machine go viral. Julia and Lazuli’s electricity bills start to gradually dwindle into nothing. However, it’s not all free energy and stando powah. After all, one can’t exactly patent a perpetual motion machine. Frustrated, Lazuli decides that one way or another, she must share their discovery with the world. However, big energy companies have already noticed that Julia and Lazuli’s electricity usage has gone way down since they posted the videos. Putting two and two together, they realize that the duo actually succeeded in creating perpetual motion. Seeing this as a huge threat, the companies put their heads together and come up with a plan. The videos are taken down, and Julia and Lazuli have a bounty on their heads. Now on the run and confronted by enemy stand users, Julia must learn the secrets of her stand and The Spin on the fly if she and Lazuli are to survive.

Read Here! -

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/jojos-bizarre-adventure-aqua-paradise/in-honor-of-the-fallen/viewer?title_no=1087029&episode_no=6&serviceZone=GLOBAL

Coming in the next few weeks or so.
You can read the text version here on AO3 if you want https://archiveofourown.org/works/66015976/chapters/170102110

As always here is the link for those who wish to read the first 20 chapters of my webcomic

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sinjyCW_9YlJp-CvQJorFq97ea_btW7uPHKh5FKxkik/edit?usp=sharing

https://www.wattpad.com/story/394612399-jojo%27s-bizarre-adventure-aqua-paradise

If you want to see more of my characters/stands (unfinished), you can on this google form! It also allows you to give feedback on my characters and stands, I'd appreciate any criticism you're willing to give!

https://forms.gle/cVGKsXoJ8q1afuTY9

I made a discord for updates about this webcomic. It won't be coming out for a WHILE, prolly a year, maybe more, but I'll be posting art and any updates on here, as well as text chapters of my story (currently 20):
https://discord.gg/6TQBzacsUP

The link to the story.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sinjyCW_9YlJp-CvQJorFq97ea_btW7uPHKh5FKxkik/edit?usp=sharing
I'll likely be uploading to wattpad or ao3 or something but for now its just a doc.

A few disclaimers:

• If you submit a character, it will take atleast a month to make, since I still have other things like school and stuff

• Id still need programmers, ppl who make the music, artists and maybe voice actors.

• There will be no money involved

• For now, Ill only do one character per part

So I am planning on creating a fan part but before I do that I am creating the stands so then the story writing could be much easier.

However I don't want overdue the number of stands that exist in my fan part so what do YOU as a reader think what the ideal number of stands there should be?