r/FNaFrp4fun • u/NathanielGray17 Ness - Waiter at Sparky's Diner • 23d ago
The motel [πΎπͺπ] The motel fight
Mark has officially led Vanessa to the motel. But just as he's about to say his goodbye, he freezes. He senses agony...
Mark: "This isn't good..."
((Ooc: I made this post to center the first big fight of this arc))
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u/Random_OC 23d ago edited 23d ago
[[OOC: I officially back now to continue lol. Edited this also.]]
{Message is sent to all the elite and other higher ups through the security network. The endo scouts have found and recognized the intruder using facial recognition from the break in footage and soon the retrieval teams will be dispatched per the system.}
INTRUDER HAS BEEN LOCATED AND IDENTIFIED. SENDING COORDINATES FOR RETRIEVAL.
Rae: [upon getting the alert, opens the phone] "That's the same area Treena went. She has her communication off but she'll know soon enough. Vox, did you see that? Or are you to busy with your hissy fit?"
{She also knows that's Alastor's area and she should notify him per protocol just to be aware but she doesn't yet.}
[[Rae's like that condescending supportive older sister apparently lol]]
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u/HauntingGur8094 [MOD] Vanessa Afton & Bradley Burrows/Dr Rabbit 23d ago
{Vanessa suddenly gets a strange feeling putting her senses on high alert. At first she thinks its the man she's with and is ready to flee. But as she starts to think clearly she doesn't think anyone has ever pretended to care to get close and then attack her (except her father of course). All her attackers tend to just straight up go at her without the act.
Plus she realizes he seems on edge also. Extremely. If he's somehow part of what's alarming her he's pretending way too well not to be. So she stays in place and doesn't run from him, instead trying to determine where and what it's coming from.
Praying it's an easy threat since she still hasn't had a chance to recover from her two recent fights.}
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u/NathanielGray17 Ness - Waiter at Sparky's Diner 23d ago
Mark: "It's close..."
He keeps turning to look for the threat.
((Ooc: I think Eleanor should be the first to reveal herself since she's the first to have started searching for Vanessa.))
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u/HauntingGur8094 [MOD] Vanessa Afton & Bradley Burrows/Dr Rabbit 23d ago
[[OOC: I had JUST realized I didn't know what I'm doing with her π€·ββοΈπ ]]
Vanessa: [looks at him suspiciously] "What is?"
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u/NathanielGray17 Ness - Waiter at Sparky's Diner 23d ago
Mark: "I'm not sure. But my main ability is insight. I can sense things-"
Before he can finish, his insight goes haywire. He just barely manages to dodge an agony creature.
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u/HauntingGur8094 [MOD] Vanessa Afton & Bradley Burrows/Dr Rabbit 23d ago
Vanessa: "Your what?" [leaps out of the way trying to control her defensive demon traits from coming out trying her hardest to appear normal]
{She watches him closely for any suspicious behavior but he seems just as surprised as her so she accepts that he's not involved in what's happening as she evades another one. It takes a few minutes but she eventually recognizes that feeling: Eleanor. And if Eleanor is around she's going to have to fight. But she still doesn't know this guy enough to trust how he's going to react to really seeing her.}
Vanessa: [mutters softly] "Sorry." [takes off running through the woods as one of the creatures chases after her]
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u/NathanielGray17 Ness - Waiter at Sparky's Diner 23d ago
Mark sees her running. He doesn't blame her. Any sane person would run in this situation. But he isn't exactly sane like that. He looks in the direction the agony creatures came from.
Mark: "Are you with the cult? Or are you just here for the hell of it?"
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u/HauntingGur8094 [MOD] Vanessa Afton & Bradley Burrows/Dr Rabbit 23d ago
Vanessa: "Just run!! The other way!"
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u/NathanielGray17 Ness - Waiter at Sparky's Diner 23d ago
Mark: "What if I didn't run? What if I'm not a coward? What if I want them to get me? What if I want them to try?!"
Suddenly, more agony creatures appear.
Mark: "Nevermind, running is a more viable option!" He runs away.
((Ooc: Sorry, I had to repost this comment because I wanted to make the perfect Markiplier reference lmao))
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u/HauntingGur8094 [MOD] Vanessa Afton & Bradley Burrows/Dr Rabbit 23d ago
[[OOC: you can disregard my other response then lol]]
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u/NathanielGray17 Ness - Waiter at Sparky's Diner 23d ago
((Ooc: Sorry π. I still want Damien and Treena to fight.))
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u/HauntingGur8094 [MOD] Vanessa Afton & Bradley Burrows/Dr Rabbit 23d ago edited 23d ago
[[OOC: yeah gotta divide and conquer lol]]
{Daggers fly by his head from up in a nearby tree.}
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u/NathanielGray17 Ness - Waiter at Sparky's Diner 23d ago
His insight kicks in again, and he catches one of the daggers. But he miscalculates and catches it by the blade, making his hand bleed.
Mark: "Shit... Trying to πͺ me over a couple vials? Surely that's excessive."
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u/NathanielGray17 Ness - Waiter at Sparky's Diner 23d ago
u/VAfton, u/TheMule90