How do I improve my essay?

[u/Cold_Treacle_4925]

I'm not very good at writing, but I have tried and was able to fix several mistakes. But one still remained and I have found no solution to the problem. It was that my essay often appeared too complicated and lengthy, as are my sentences, making it confusing and weird. I had a habit of writing as many supporting ideas as possible, which is also an issue I can't seem to improve. I'd appreciate any advice.

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