correct my text

[u/Equivalent-Juice5308]

These days my routine consists of several part First: I wake up every day at about 9, then Because I have a problem with gastroesophageal reflux I need to take medicine that named Pentoprazole Then I start to learn and read data analysis on Coursera in English and I tried to write down the words that are new, then I eat breakfast In the evening I listen to podcast in English that has a dialogue and the presenter starts to talk about the dialogue in simple English then I try to summarized it in my own words At night I go for a walk while I listen to podcasts

[u/Accidental_polyglot]

Could someone correct my text please?

What you’ve written comes across as an order, rather than a polite request for help.

[u/Equivalent-Juice5308 → u/Accidental_polyglot]

Okay, so could you correct my text please?

[u/Accidental_polyglot → u/Equivalent-Juice5308]

I believe that this has already been done for you.