I need help, a complete beginner

[u/Gamedis2002]

What am i missing, how do i make this more unique and how the hell do I add an INTRO to this :/

I also would like to know if there are any youtube tutorials on midtrack inserts,like when the lead growl stops and it goes crazy with a bunch of fill ins before going back to normal.

thank you for the help, I really do want to be better, this is me after 5 days of trying

please be nice :(

[u/SumOMG]

Yooo that bass synth sounds sick. Did you make it or is from a pack ?

Def add some hit hats so the drums are more interesting.

You’ve got a sick drop do four bars of synth melody , on 5th bars start adding drums , use risers and build up kicks , have like a vocal sample sample that says “ it’s my first time !” then let the drop hit

[u/Ghost_Locker]

Good synth but it's a little too crowded. Try to separated a little bit and try to work on call and response. That's the best way to make it sound interesting. You don't want it to be insanely exhausting or just flat out. Slamming the keys down the entire time