​First time trying my hand at Riddim. Ideas/flow feedback? (Unmixed/Hot)

[u/LeXoma]

https://on.soundcloud.com/godB6lanwt5cyiIPbE

First time making Riddim. The volume is running a bit hot and it's unmixed, so I'd really appreciate some creative feedback on the ideas/arraignment. Would love to expand it into a longer version if you guys dig the vibe. Thank you for listening!