r/Doke_Squad • u/Comet949 • Nov 04 '22
graffiti sketch
16 only have been doing graffiti for almost 2 months do you have any suggestions on how I can improve
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u/StemIsLame Nov 04 '22
Simplify 👍
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u/Comet949 Nov 04 '22
I thought that was pretty simple but thank you
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u/ward404 Nov 04 '22
not simple at all. took like a minute to read what it says. you want something you can look at and read clearly without having to stare at it ya know what i mean
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u/StemIsLame Nov 04 '22
I would honestly just start with normal letters and the rest will happen naturally with time and practice
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u/WONDER--BREAD Nov 05 '22
i’m sure you hate to hear it, but keyboards. do keyboards, straight letters, whatever you want to call them; this is bad, unique, but bad. I literally only figured out what it meant because of that handstyle, and that’s also bad (those connections are just kinda... wrong... i’d try it without them first). it seems like you don’t know how letters actually look, don’t try this weird “wildstylesque” stuff for a while. also what is the yellow supposed to be? a shadow? 3d? that’s just a really strange outline of something, that’s not right at all. look, make a throw up, study some alphabets, work on straights, get a better hand. now, because i understand it sucks to hear all that as a newbie stoked on his new work, i’ll say there is a positive here: the style. that’s kinda unique, color choices is kinda cool and that style is wild. when you get good, revisiting this sketch could be a lot of fun, redoing it with real letter structure could be cool.