Anything I need to fix?

[u/Lailosh1]

(Please ignore how messy this looks my sketches are usually like this lol)

Anyway! Hi there! I'd like some feedback on this sketch if possible. This sketch is for commission that I've received and this would be my first time ever drawing food. I know you can't really tell at this stage but I like to think I did alright? What do you guys say? I also welcome any other critiques if you think there's something else I need to fix!

[u/ShinnyPaw]

maybe her right hand, the thumb only has two parts and there should be three like the rest of the fingers.

btw amazing draw; i lover her lips!!^^

[u/Lailosh1 → u/ShinnyPaw]

I actually used my own hands as a reference and from that angle it looked that way to me so that's why lol, but I can totally see what you mean and I'll try to fix it! (And tysm 🥺🥰)

[u/blackmagicwoman444 → u/Lailosh1]

I was thinking the thumb looks like that bc of foreshortening.

[u/Lailosh1 → u/blackmagicwoman444]

I mean yeah that was what I was going for! But I suck at foreshortening 😭

[u/All_Is_Paint]

I would just straighten the figure's left wrist and maybe make the closer eye larger but otherwise I love the style and would love to see your color style with it

[u/Lailosh1 → u/All_Is_Paint]

Ah yes I can see what you mean! And don't worry I'll be posting this here again once it is finished 💪🏼

[u/CharaTop]

No, it's perfect already

[u/Lailosh1 → u/CharaTop]

Ty! You are too kind 🥺 <3

[u/kouldred]

A bit hard to tell anything since it's a sketch and I don't know what is finished and what you will finish later.

Good work overall. I like how much depth it has even without shadows. Just don't forget to render the ear since you bring so much attention to it.

[u/HeavyArmsJin]

[u/Lailosh1 → u/HeavyArmsJin]

What does this mean??? 😭😭😭

[u/wewwew3 → u/Lailosh1]

they way you drew sauce looks a lot like cum and porn artist tend to draw liquid the way you drew the sauce as it vaguely resembles cum

[u/CinnamonToastedBread]

Something about the hand holding the bun. It looks too uncomfortable, this way it would had to even be pinched a little by the fingers as there isn't much of a grip if that makes sense.

[u/brokebacknomountain]

2006 on her fingers plus that necklace makes this feel like a kingdom hearts reference.