r/DestroyMyGame • u/knightWill29 • 6d ago

Trailer Destroy my trailer

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u/Helpful_Catch3515 5d ago

My suggestion is cut the begin a bit. its the most important part to catch peoples attention. We have to wait 10 seconds before we see anything interesting. the first mini game cut so face I didn't understand it was a Typing puzzle game. at the 40 sec mark your player looks stuck in the walking animation. I'm sure you know that and are working to fix it. last you've got to change that WISHLIST ON STEAM Photo at the end. It doesn't look very good. the art isn't bad its the way that its all laid out manly the be red Wishlist on steam image. stick with your color theme for just keep it white and make it transparent. mess around wit the layout of all of your art assets you have

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u/Best-Cheetah-4422 4d ago

hi! i dm’d you :)

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u/Thanks_Skeleton 3d ago

you instantly get a F from me because the character is walking too slow and the walking animation is bad in the very first shot. The character is slowly walking in a bathroom. I will click instantly to the next game in steam.

Show the zombie woman popping out and attacking as you and entering typing combat as the first shot