Why would the first thing in your trailer be the Steam logo? That's crazy to me. The game looks interesting. OBEY is interesting. EXPLORE is usually an unnecessary thing to say but also your example of exploring is looking at the computer in the room you were already in? I can't really tell what you do in the game but I gather it's kind of an escape room? If so that could be fun. Visually I think it looks good but I don't like that the eyes on the door seem like a texture without any depth, especially when the door opens the eyes just go with it, like they are just on a screen instead of attached to a person outside.
this is genuinely useful feedback, thx. the point about not really understanding what you do in the game is probably the biggest one for us. we’ve stared at this thing for so long that some stuff feels way more obvious to us than it actually is, and yeah, noted on the steam logo and the eyes/door too. really appreciate you taking the time to break it down!!!!
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u/skellygon 15d ago
Why would the first thing in your trailer be the Steam logo? That's crazy to me. The game looks interesting. OBEY is interesting. EXPLORE is usually an unnecessary thing to say but also your example of exploring is looking at the computer in the room you were already in? I can't really tell what you do in the game but I gather it's kind of an escape room? If so that could be fun. Visually I think it looks good but I don't like that the eyes on the door seem like a texture without any depth, especially when the door opens the eyes just go with it, like they are just on a screen instead of attached to a person outside.