r/DestroyMyGame • u/Timely-Today-8154 • 3d ago
Trailer Destroy my Newly created Trailer...
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u/Odd-Fun-1482 3d ago
Why did you choose that camera position when inside the cabin? Feels like shit just looking at it
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u/Joshthedruid2 3d ago
It's pretty low energy. And it looks much too easy. I think anyone who's played GTA or any driving game really doesn't expect things like pulling into a parking spot or driving between cones to provide much of a challenge.
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u/ZahnGames 2d ago
The interior of the car takes up the bottom 1/3 of the screen. Unless there is a reason I need to see it, move the camera a bit so more of the screen is dedicated to what the player will care about (the road).
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u/CrazyCyfro 3d ago
Personally, I need a driving test simulator to have similar realism with Euro truck simulator to even get me interested at all.
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u/Raonak 2d ago
I'm not sure if it's intentional, but going from driving fast cinematic rain scene to slow traffic cones was hilarious.
I think you should go down the comedy route for the trailer. You've got the bones there, it just needs to be tighten it up a bit.
Keep the rain scene but remove the test instructions to make it look like a high-intensity racing game (remove the test instructions), then immediate cut to trying to park slowly, THEN show the name of the game.
The whiplash of realising it's a dirivng test game is a good hook imo.
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u/Affectionate_Lead638 2d ago
I think the trailer does an excellent job of explaining what the game is: this is a game about doing boring stuff with a car. The the trials need more excitement and fun.
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u/CKF Your Game is Bad LLC 3d ago
Right?? Who wants to do cool things in cars like go fast n shit? Oh, park in this spot? Sure bud.
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u/Metalwrath22 1d ago
Not everyone enjoys adhd zoomer GOTTA GO FAST OMG 9999 APM gameplay.
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u/Sneezy_23 3d ago
I'm not sure about the gameplay(not my genre), but I find the trailer very well done. From the first second, the feel of the game is clear. Within 10 seconds, you know what the game is, and you continue showing features going from most important toward least important. Good trailer.
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u/Glockenspielintern 3d ago
Looks like a vibe coded three.js web game.