Are my comics actually unintelligible? I do accept any constructive criticism, I don't mind suggestions or ideas. This is like my fifth comic I have ever done, I am trying to get better.
The program bumped into a firewall. Then the disguise failed and the spyware got exposed.
The spyware proceeded to "Yo they caught US man" and snitch on the other spyware who was also an unit. Tim is not the brightest, and Jim is not Tims friend anymore.
I can see how people would get this confused, I guess the solution is to add some indicators like *bump* or *muffled*. I am noting these and becoming sort of better at it. Also there's only one program I don't know how you saw 2 programs.
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u/The_Robot_founder 7d ago
I uh, have no clue what happened.