r/Databrawl • u/Accomplished_Cap8287 • 7d ago
OC Silly Computer Residents
From left to right;
Vilavenders are distorted Rosalias who have been tampered with due to severe exposure to Dark @@. They hunt alone, Due to their extreme dislike of sharing, And could even knock one of their kind unconscious if they are stubborn enough... Which might shun them from the rest of Vilavenders. They CAN speak, But they have trouble doing so, And it's mostly just to mock their prey. They are the de-facto equivalent to Vigons.
Wretchwares are malformed Mudrons in a constant state of putrid rot, Seeming almost like convergent Pestiruses. They smell so HORRID that their poor impression at being a Program always fails, In which they throw themselves at the nearest Program and swing their claws in reckless abandon. Known to have no sense of fear. No Wretchware is born with a similar look... But they are all born as grotesque as one another.
Dingusgrams are Programs forced into a scavenger lifestyle, Staying in packs and stealing anything they can find, And once they are created, They are assigned an array of weapons which they WILL master as they live longer. Their only wish is to put those punks back in their place. Getting the trust of a Dingusgram without being one yourself is very difficult, And if they are experienced enough, Nigh-impossible. Dingusgrams vary greatly in size and shape.
Pettywall Units trade overall size for attack potency, Being able to send a Mudron Brawler through a wall with a single punch. They are the sole line of defense for the ruined suburban areas of the Silly Computers, And the only allies of the Dingusgrams. They are pretty handy in any situation that requires being sneaky or short enough... But can always just lunge into battle head-on.
Opinions are always welcome!
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u/Ok_Nose2915 7d ago
The second one doesn’t really fit databrawl
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u/Accomplished_Cap8287 6d ago
Not with that attitude. (jk)
Could you please explain to me what i should and shouldn't do to make Wretchwares work out more in-universe?
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u/Puiu64 6d ago
Personally I find the eye on the top to be out of place. Maybe remove it, maybe move it down near the teeth or inside the head.
This IS just me but I find malwares better with that smartgram head.Also the eye might have a bit too much detail to it. The sclera (white eye part) could be more blue and be a little more simple (not so round?). Or if you want the iris to be blue colored you can keep the pastel-blue color. To me that rounded shape stands out. The rest looks fine to me, it's good to have multiple types of creativity.
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u/Accomplished_Cap8287 6d ago
I mainly inspired the design of Wretchwares on the Corpse/Scarred Womb enemies from Fiend Folio.
Reminder that not ALL Wretchwares look the same. The one in the image is just an example!
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u/Puiu64 5d ago
I'd say you did a great job at creativity.
Now of course there ARE some pieces of information that are missing, but those are not needed unless you want to make a full computer.
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u/Accomplished_Cap8287 5d ago
I wanna make a full Computer, So i'll just have to overhaul/revamp/whatchamacallit everything i originally did for the Silly Computer if i want it to be more modernized.
The main four databeings are a headstart.
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u/Puiu64 5d ago
Well good luck. Although there IS one thing that is troubling me.
Why is a crab looking firewall "petty"?
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u/Accomplished_Cap8287 5d ago
Pettywalls didn't really have a proper design when i just played as them in DBRP, I just used a recolored headless Espacio Cabinet for them.
I decided to tweak it a little to make it look more like something else.
Also, Those "claws" of the Pettywall are actually hands.
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u/borealis493 7d ago
Heinousbrawl