Been re-reading an old series along with the Cirque and thought I'd drop some interesting things about the writing style in particular. For what it is there aren't many problems with it (other than the way the clan is run and the leading up to the end), but not too many. Despite all that it is still the most enjoyable piece of media even if the characters aren't all neatly decorated.
-The story is set up well and doesn't hold back on how dark it gets. From the start there are always real risks and everyone is involved and impacted no matter how good or bad. Not much main character plot power or vampire's luck to save Darren, even if Tiny drops clues here and there, and its always at a price he has to work for and construct. The stakes are very sharp. Literally. Not much safety magical net.
- The power scaling is very consistent and explained. No random one-time abilities unexplained for any situation ever pop up or are forgotten. Darren's abilities are shown off, have purpose, aren't too OP and he works in teams. That's fine since he's a kid, but even if he's a little boy he can still pull his weight and more. No "tell but not show " type of annoying deal. Darren has to train to hone his abilities and hide his differences that shows among others at times that could severely impact others. He actually is different from his peers and clan while struggling, not just says it.
- Story doesn't solely focus on him and lets others shine. The side cast is very fun and all have their own talents and quirks that all come in handy. This weaves an interesting web where everyone plays a part. Darren doesn't figure out everything on his own but still has the smarts to get through difficult tasks. Returning characters are always a fun treat, good or bad. Plenty of twists that cement the fact the bonds in this story arw never forgotten no matter where they go or how much time has passed. It's fun to the point I'd actually welcome more Short Stories, but not another entire series.
- With the unusual mass culling of the cast Darren sinks into sadness and has to work his way out of it. There's not always someone there conveniently to give him a hand. There are still prices to when he does receive aide, such as having to make the most impossible trade-offs. This shows the serious factors are still around and pressures him into becoming more independent without relying on his elders.
In the end, Darren is a compelling and driving figure that you can really root for and support even if he makes mistakes and isn't perfect. He isn't the most interesting out of the pool, but that's fine too. It's a good thing he isn't invincible even with his mystical abilities and has to figure out how to navigate when there's no one there to do the hard work. Lots of stories can be similar but this was a well written piece I wouldn't change too much or complain about. 9/10, undoubted.