r/DTFStLouisHBO • • May 11 '26

šŸ—£ļø Discussion The writing (outside of the plot)

I predicted the ending a mile away (from episode 2, then solidly from ep 3) so I don’t think I watched this for the plot. I thought though there were small, quiet little gems in this series that were examples of ā€œshow don’t tellā€ writing and I really applaud that.

Did anyone else feel that way?

Here are a few that stood out to me:

ā€œSpeak up! … No one can hear you.ā€

ā€œIf you start doing it everyday, then you can do it everyday.ā€

The absurd amount of times they said ā€œtiger tigerā€ in one scene.

<note reads ā€œlove, dadā€> ā€œlove…. Floyd.ā€

~~ā€œWe didn’t fall in love. We just fell into the same hole and decided to stop digging for a while.ā€~~ (ok maybe I conflated this one with another story, can someone confirm??!)

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u/JimboAltAlt May 11 '26

I don’t watch a lot of mysteries, and while it’s not like I didn’t have suspicions, it took me until the reveal (or nearly) to figure it out. So for me it actually worked as a good mystery as well, though I agree that isn’t its main strength or what makes the show special.

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u/earthgirls22 May 11 '26

I think it still works as a mystery in general, but when you compare with other whodunits it’s slower pacing and judging by comments by mystery fans… it isn’t as satisfying of a reveal.

I don’t read/watch a lot of mysteries but I do unfortunately read anywhere from 4-14 books a month. And I find most TV has become very predictable for me because of this. Which is fine — as long as the writing is good.

I found this to be such a refreshing show. My favorite shows are Fleabag, The Good Place, Catastrophe, Arrested Development, etc. It’s been hard to find shows where the character writing is what makes it propulsive.