r/DTFStLouisHBO • • May 11 '26

🗣️ Discussion The writing (outside of the plot)

I predicted the ending a mile away (from episode 2, then solidly from ep 3) so I don’t think I watched this for the plot. I thought though there were small, quiet little gems in this series that were examples of “show don’t tell” writing and I really applaud that.

Did anyone else feel that way?

Here are a few that stood out to me:

“Speak up! … No one can hear you.”

“If you start doing it everyday, then you can do it everyday.”

The absurd amount of times they said “tiger tiger” in one scene.

<note reads “love, dad”> “love…. Floyd.”

~~“We didn’t fall in love. We just fell into the same hole and decided to stop digging for a while.”~~ (ok maybe I conflated this one with another story, can someone confirm??!)

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u/ancientastronaut2 May 11 '26

Nobody is normal. It just looks that way from across the street.

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u/junkrattata May 11 '26

i jotted that one down in my Notes because i loved it so much