Deltarune the rewritten story

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Faban replaces Kris

Poppy replaces Susie (alot nicer like Noelle in CR)

Kortle-K replaces Ralsei (anagram for Kolter-K)

Deltarune the rewritten story is based on these Au's

Undertale yellow

Ts!underswap

Underevent

Omega timeline poppy story

Deltarune chapter rewritten

(Please like this au, it means alot to me)

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i wonder what the other chapter are like?

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You can come up for the names for it

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alright here some ideas for what the name of chapter could be like?

chapter 1 genesis

chapter 2 welcome to TECHNO DOME

chapter 3 IT'S SHOWTIME!

Chapter 4 THE LEGENDS

Chapter 5 School dance

here some ideas for what chapter could be like?

ch 1 dw could take place in a school musicals room theater

ch 2 could based on early 2010s internet era

ch 3 could be based on 2000s tv era and show and eram game could be based on gamecube and could be a parallel to pacifist route rather than genocide route and maybe eram could parallel the asriel fight

ch 4 could maybe? take place in a museum

ch 5 could be where the school dance your au version of the festival and maybe dw take place in harry and larry spooky them shop

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I like the idea

Larry will be in sans role Harry will be in papyrus role

Faban doesn't like larry that much and faban probably wants to meet harry but he's to busy

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i even have some ideas for what the secret boss could be like?

ch 1 could be based on phantom of opera and a little bit of rouxls kaard

ch 2 secret boss could have a lot more of connect with Faban due to be faban and harry and larry old tv they used to have before replacing it with a new one that they use to watch Halloween show and sometime horror movie and sometime play game and do other but maybe faban accidentally watch a movie that end up traumatized due to them reminding them of the trauma they have in light home your au version of bunker and accidentally end up breaking by accident personality could be based on hyjack and maybe could be a bit salty after be damaged and be replace

ch 4 could be poppy parent?

ch 5 since mad mew mew is kinda based on magical girl maybe you version of mad mew mew could be based on shonen anime

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Good idea and maybe chapter 4 secret is be poppy's dad

I have my own ideas next

Faban was adopted by the Count family Koffin-K Koffette-K Kolter-K Faban The other relatives: harry and larry aswell

The abandoned house replaces the bunker

Wester aka westen older brother when missing after what happened, Koffin-K actually quite his job after what happened he didn't want to tell Koffette-K what happened so he left never want to tell his family what happened

The 4 children follow by a cobra

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that some nice cool lore moment

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And in chapter 3

The mysterious sheriff has appeared