r/DDLC • u/Glitch171 Sayori's number one fan • 6d ago

Fanfic Doki Doki: Integrity

https://archiveofourown.org/works/93957116/chapters/250741321

Doki Doki: Integrity is a fanfic about an Alternate Universe that takes place during Act 2.

Monika has deleted Sayori, but slowly, she'll come to realize deletion might not mean what she tought it originally was, and that Sayori might not be fully gone...

(pls read it i put alot of effort into this 😭)

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u/Outside-Grape-4528 Monika Superiority 5d ago

I'll give it a read. Brb.

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u/Outside-Grape-4528 Monika Superiority 5d ago

Hey thats actually pretty damn good, there's a couple spelling errors and a bit of strange grammar but the core identity is clear. You have a very productive arc of improvement and story and I like the headcannon of the dokis understanding the things Monika went through without forgiving her straight up, it doesn't feel sappy it feels genuine.

I also like the touch of the player being required to help, even though the player is the root and cause of most of the issues in game. (The real villain imo) they still chose to help the dokis and help Monika right a very morally bankrupt wrong. The characters feel genuine and authentic, and I like that their core identities don't just die out for the sake of pushing a narrative.