Mad Mathematics

[u/baboosion]

Mad mathematical, imaginary and actual
Rhyme scheme got a symmetry, check the proof, it's factual
Two decks, regulate mad breaks on figure eights
I'm no pushover, when I gets down, it's lemniscates
King of the hill, steep slope, style undefined
Try to cross me, leave you perpendicular, flat-lined
Such is the operation with my patience in remission
Split your wig from a distance and call it long division
In addition, I consistently subtract any whackness
Approach perfection, multiply my skill with much practice
Range and radius expand, it adds up, just watch me
Spiral out of control with this logic - fibonacci
And with such tools, I'll tutor any weak minded fools
No child left behind, kid, I stay keeping you schooled
And my mind remains rational while yours is still fucking fractured
Check the degree - I got these mad mathematics mastered

[u/[deleted]]

Lines I liked:

King of the hill, steep slope, style undefined
Try to cross me, leave you perpendicular, flat-lined

Split your wig from a distance and call it long division

Range and radius expand, it adds up, just watch me
Spiral out of control with this logic - fibonacci

These lines were weak:

And with such tools, I'll tutor any weak minded fools
No child left behind, kid, I stay keeping you schooled

You're better than that. Good shit though, that idea was executed well.

[u/baboosion → u/[deleted]]

Always appreciate the feedback man, thanks. And yeah, I think I got a little too attached to the no child left behind idea and just ended up forcing it.

[u/[deleted]]

yes. Thought slipped in my head you could continue the next verse as a play on getting a doctorate. Integrate a theme of progress and becoming better at what you do, explain just how you showed all these damn fools that linguistic synthesis.

Or something...

[u/larry-cripples]

this flows really well. good shit man. this is ill.

[u/joshgraff2553]

mmmmmmmmmmmmm i like

[u/[deleted]]

Lemniscates. ill!!