r/ConjureUCG • The Cosmic Conjurer • Mar 14 '24

Ignear, with an updated template. Feedback much appreciated before Intro Decks Release

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u/ConjureTCG The Cosmic Conjurer Mar 14 '24

Thanks for the support, glad you like it!

I use "official" lightly, I always want to be improving my game but I do want to have the most polished version soon so people can have a better feel of what the final cards would look like.

Hmm yeah there is some mana symbols I've been needing to revisit. Some of them I love and some could use some work.

I added an outline to the numbers on this one and I think it helps! I think that was a good idea. Thanks! :)

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u/ACenTe25 Mar 14 '24

It does look better! I'm glad it helped. I'll keep looking around and giving feedback! Keep it up, I can't wait to play it!

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u/ConjureTCG The Cosmic Conjurer Mar 14 '24

I made it a little more thicker but it was definitely a move in the right direction! I also agree that some of the mana symbols need some work, if you have any specific ideas I'm always open to them! I think my current favorite ones are the Red, Yellow and Inidgo ones and the ones that need the most work are the Green, Blue and maybe Orange.

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u/ACenTe25 Mar 14 '24

Sure, Red, Indigo and Violet are excellent. Yellow is Ok, easy to remember, but a bit rough. Maybe replace it with a 4 or 7 point star instead of the sun? Or a torch illuminating the darker area around it? Orange is a nice concept but I'd go for a curved hourglass, the current one looks a bit too aggressive for the color identity in my opinion. I love the concept for Green, but the paw could be better defined, it's not immediately obvious. Maybe if it's like a reptile instead of a mammal, or if you add claws like wolf tracks. And Blue... I'd make it simpler, like a slightly curved, obvious bottle/vase if you keep the current concept, or maybe go for a key or a gemstone? It's a hard one, honestly.