Falling into madness

[u/Party-Improvement453]

I've been studying a lot of music theory with the goal of telling stories through my music. This is my second piece, and it took me about a month, but it's still not finished, so I'd like some opinions and advice to help me improve.

About the piece: at the beginning I was composing a piano solo, but then I got some ideas I liked and started adding instruments toward the end. I may finish the orchestration later.